Congratulations and in on time!! This is a great beginning. I like your urban sound – sound coming from dog sound. The car is really well done but I am still not sure about the back of the car. Yes you should have probably gone to the trouble of the taking a photo of the back of a car then replicating it. You have good illustration techniques so I think you could have done the back. Engine sound might have added some more to the narrative – as per the student suggestion. The wheels and the road are great. Also the movement of the type has timing variety which is clever but does not represent the making of graffiti – there could have been a simple story of some one coming up and making the graffiti and then driving off.
Congratulations and in on time!! This is a great beginning.
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The car is really well done but I am still not sure about the back of the car. Yes you should have probably gone to the trouble of the taking a photo of the back of a car then replicating it. You have good illustration techniques so I think you could have done the back.
Engine sound might have added some more to the narrative – as per the student suggestion.
The wheels and the road are great. Also the movement of the type has timing variety which is clever but does not represent the making of graffiti – there could have been a simple story of some one coming up and making the graffiti and then driving off.
please upload you last assignment
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