Design: Very minimal poster. I like your color choice and the lions lips are very subtle while being freekish. but I think you have to pay attention to the negative space. There is a great deal of dead space at the bottom of the picture. There needs to be something in the middle bottom area. Use of complementary color – with the red look like a circus poster. looks like and old tv set. Text: I like the type in the circles – as we discussed the text starts to form the circle which gives it an illustration feel. LIne the text up with the picture box. Your spacing was good with the heading. Technique – could have done more with the image – Very close to your friends picture. Sort of feel you were so busy getting the other image done you neglected this one. se you next semester
Design: Very minimal poster. I like your color choice and the lions lips are very subtle while being freekish. but I think you have to pay attention to the negative space. There is a great deal of dead space at the bottom of the picture. There needs to be something in the middle bottom area. Use of complementary color – with the red look like a circus poster. looks like and old tv set.
ReplyDeleteText: I like the type in the circles – as we discussed the text starts to form the circle which gives it an illustration feel. LIne the text up with the picture box. Your spacing was good with the heading.
Technique – could have done more with the image – Very close to your friends picture. Sort of feel you were so busy getting the other image done you neglected this one.
se you next semester